The man is alone,
who doesn't have a heart,
who doesn't have a soul,
of his own.
He walks on the path of thorns alone,
with no one to give a hand of his own,
He laughs alone and cries alone,
with no one to share a part of his own.
He makes everyone sad,
with his crazy demands,
And is left by everyone,
as a lonely man.
No one likes to be alone,
but some are there who like it soon,
They feel themselves as the happiest person,
with nothing to worry or care about.

the word "soon" I feel stands out like a sore thumb in the second line, last para....a nice poem otherwise....:)
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